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Thursday, November 11, 2021

My mini beast adventure

 

My mini Beast adventure


There was once a flying caterpillar called Joe, his features were wings legs and stripes and a stinger. He pollinates native flowers and eats tiny insects.His predators are big huge birds, like a pukeko or a tui and ducks. He pollinates flowers with 19 others since they only released 20 of them it takes 3 years for them to reproduce babys. Joe Lived a nice life until one day the birds were coming everybody panicked and ran to their little bushes to hide but Joe was the only one still outside and a pukeko was chasing him he tried to fly off but he got hit by a car windshield and flew into a forest on the other side of the road. Joe got up and tried to walk home but then he saw an older flying caterpillar his name was Arthur he was very old his wings were weak and legs were tired until Joe found him he wanted to get home but the caterpillar said he wasn’t ready yet he was only a small soft flying caterpillar so he was trained. He first tried a  punching bag that arthur made from feathers and some wool from a sheep that died from a wolf a long time ago so he told Joe to try punch it hard but joe went soft on it he needed rage so Arthur said a insult like what a bird would say and Joe got madder and madder and punched it so hard it almost broke the bag so he kept on making him angry to punch the bag until he broke it then he was lifting weights to get stronger and stronger that Arthur made from a small stick and 2 tiny rocks and then he tried dodging if the birds tried to bite him or something so Arthur threw things that were very light other wise they would fall and barely touch joe he got hit a bunch of times but then he knew what he had to do so when he threw a tiny stick and ducked down and turned left and right and jumped and then he was ready and then Arthur told him how he could get home he said to listen his way home and then in a second he vanished. Joe was surprised but didnt get what he meant by listen his way home but then he heard the noise it was the birds trying to destory the other caterpillars bushes and Joe knew what he had to do so he went on as the sound got higher and higher and saw the road but he forgot he could fly so he flew over the cars. Flying over the road was making him a bit tired but he kept on going and reached his home then he learnt what he trained for and smacked a pukeko in the face and the other birds tried to fight back but he kept smacking them so they flew away. Joe was the protector of flying caterpillars but he couldn’t do it alone so he trained the other flying caterpillars how to fight back because the stinger wasn’t enough so he told them what Arthur said and after fighting for 3 years they started to reproduce babies and they lived a happy life forever.


The End.


1 comment:

  1. Hi Liam what a lovely story line you have come up with! I like how you introduced a second character called Arthur! Which turned out to be a very important character in the story. Dont forget to add in full stops at the end of each of your sentences. Great effort.
    Miss Hudson

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