Liam, some great work about chocolate there! I like your story about the boy who liked chocolate so much that was all he thought about and dreamed about and even all he watched videos about. The chocolate eggs looked delicious. Do you eat a lot of chocolate?
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Liam, some great work about chocolate there! I like your story about the boy who liked chocolate so much that was all he thought about and dreamed about and even all he watched videos about. The chocolate eggs looked delicious. Do you eat a lot of chocolate?
ReplyDeleteHi Liam, I loved reading your narrative about the boy who liked chocolate! You are doing so well!
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