Liam, I love your kindness poem - I like the repetition of the words 'kindness' 'heart' and 'happy'. Good work! If you had to write another poem of your choice, what would it be about?
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Liam, I love your kindness poem - I like the repetition of the words 'kindness' 'heart' and 'happy'. Good work! If you had to write another poem of your choice, what would it be about?
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