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Tuesday, September 7, 2021

Purpose: to narrate Spider man VS The evil robot

 Spider man VS The evil Robot

One day ago. There was a hero named Spider man a person with the powers to shoot webs and stick the things the webs hit. He can beat any kind of villain sometimes. Tho but he had a good time until that day. Things started to explode everywhere they were blowing up the road the buildings even the hovering rails that the train goes on. Because of that people started to panic and were running everywhere trying to avoid the explosions. Spider man heard the sound and decided to try figure out what was happening to the city and then he heard a explosion and saw the rails exploded and then he saw the train coming and the driver saw and tryed to brake but it wasn’t enough spider man tried to stop pushing it but it didnt work but he had a idea and used his webs to try stop the train and he thought it wouldn’t work but it did work, but he still had to figure out whos causing the explosions then he saw a piece of dynamite got thrown to a building then he looked up and saw it was a villain minion in a flying machine trying to throw dynamite. Spider man used his webs to get up and tried to break the machine while the minion didnt noice, but then he saw the boss of him come in spider man gasped and then saw that the boss was a robot. the robot the minions created because they were bored of doing nothing every day. Spider man tried to break the robot boss machine but it was too far away on the top of the boss machine he used his webs but the machine chopped it, he wasn’t trying hard enough but then he had a idea so he started to stand still on a building and the robot thought he was giving up and then. Spider man shot a web to the top of the machine and broke the machine. Then he destoryed the machine the minions gasped and started to run but they couldn’t. had to rebuild what ever they destroyed and had to leave to not cause this again the city was was saved and spider man was happy he thought he they were gone, but at least he thought the were still coming back and were gonna fight back and decided to get another boss again.


1 comment:

  1. Hi Liam
    Wow I love the words you have chosen to use in your writing such as "gasped" it is very effective and engaging for the reader!
    Well done .
    Miss Hudson

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