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Wednesday, September 22, 2021

Week 9 writing when i got super powers

 The day i woke up with super powers


Once upon a time i was in a town doing what i like to do

Until one day when i woke up i started to see that i was flying and then when i tried to make toast my hand burned it to toast and melted the butter onto the toast and i tried to grab the toast but it was floating into my mouth and when i went to work i just flew there and into the room i had to work and explain things while flying and sleep everynight while flying infact i was flying everywhere and everyday then i had to fly to places instead of cars planes buses and trains and it would take a long time to get where i wanted to i would always hit my head on the top of the door everytime because i was flying and the blanket when i sleep if i sleep with somebody else i steal their blanket i cant grab any thing on the floor because im flying not even clothes or food but i can grab high things for smaller people i sometimes even drop food that i eat and cant grab it and thats what happened when i got super powers. 


1 comment:

  1. Wow cool storyline Liam! Have a go at adding in some full stops and changing the little i to capital I.
    Great job!
    Miss Hudson

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